Tuesday, July 7, 2009

Honorary R-Team Member for this week is... Part 2!


...Part 2!

Author Notes:

This story comes with a few warnings:

1. This is WAY out there, and so ridiculous I made myself laugh sometimes, but that's what fantasy is about, right?

2. There's some boy-on-boy action (because that's the way I like it).

3. It's total SMUT (because, again, that's the way I like it).


I do not own Twilight or Edward Cullen. Stephenie Meyer does. Because she's awesome. I also don't have any claim on Robert Pattinson, as much as I'd love to think so.

Now that you have been warned and equiped, it's time to read and enjoy!


Hmmm.... where were we? Aaaah! Yes! Makehimmoan felt something cold behind her!!! Here we go...


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My jaw dropped open.


I wanted to laugh at the absurdity. But my inner monologue just shrugged.


Go with it.


"Listen to yourself, love." Edward smiled softly.


Oh, I kinda forgot about the whole mind reading thing.


Edward chuckled knowingly and leaned in for a kiss. I held my breath as his impossibly cold, hard lips met mine. An inexplicable heat soared through my entire body. I could feel my face flushing. When I could finally breathe again it came in short gasps.


Edward pulled away momentarily and returned once more, nudging my lips open with his icy tongue. The sensation was indescribable. His cold body against my skin left a trail of goose bumps, but his kiss warmed it from the inside. The pleasure was excruciating.

Rob returned to thrusting his tongue into me relentlessly, while Edward continued to kiss me slowly, cupping my head in his right hand. His left hand explored my hips and torso, finally finding its way to my breast. He palmed my soft flesh with purpose. My nipple grew harder yet, as if straining to be closer to him.

My breath was becoming frantic and unmanageable. I grabbed a fistful each of Rob and Edward's hair and crushed them both into me. I wanted more even though I wasn't quite sure I was able to handle it.

I was approaching a frenzied climax. With every breath came a strangled shriek.

Then in perfectly synchronized harmony, Edward pinched my nipple at the same moment as Rob sucked on my clit and curled his fingers into my sweet spot again.


My orgasm exploded from every crevice of my body. I screamed into Edward's mouth as Rob continued to suck me and pulse his fingers into me.

I dropped my hands from their hair, seemingly having lost the ability to control my limbs.

Edward planted cool, feathery kisses all over my mouth. Rob pulled his fingers from me slowly and planted a last soft kiss on my clit.

I tried to force my mind to make complete sentences, but it was an impossible task. Even if the sentences were formed, they would never be able to leave my lips.


I was paralyzed with pleasure.


I stared at the two astonishingly beautiful men before me. Rob had settled his head in the hollow of my hip and was tracing shapes onto my tummy with his finger. Edward was propped up on his elbow next to me, trailing tiny kisses up and down my neck and shoulder.

A thought flashed into my mind as I watched them in my amazed stupor. My body responded with a fresh wave of moisture at the mental image I was getting. My head was swimming with a heady mixture of lust and disbelief.

Rob cocked an eyebrow at Edward, who responded with a slight nod. "She's fine, just a little overwhelmed," he chuckled. "But there may be something we can do to snap her out of it." Edward whispered in a devilish tone that matched the glint in his amber eyes.


Edward leaned forward and whispered something into Rob's ear. Rob's eyebrows shot up momentarily before his lips curled into a wicked smile that matched Edward's.

They both sat up onto their knees on either side of me, facing each other. Rob completely naked and Edward fully clothed in a dark blue t-shirt and jeans.

Rob tugged at the hem of Edward's t-shirt and lifted it over his head. Both their exposed bodies glistened in the dimmed room. The moon was dancing off of the thin sheen on sweat covering Rob's torso in almost the same way it cast a shimmer on Edward's marble skin.


Rob's hand lingered on Edward's hip after his shirt had been discarded. Rob glanced over at me curiously and then to Edward, who nodded encouragingly. Rob reached down to Edward's jeans and undid the button and zipper, letting them fall down to his knees.

Edward reached around and squeezed Rob's ass slightly, causing my eyes to widen, while the power of speech still eluded me. As well as all major motor skills.

Rob took Edward's face in his hands as Edward pulled him closer by his shoulders. They looked at each other for a moment and then at me. Knowing smiles played on both their lips, and I knew in an instant Edward had caught my stray thought and was now developing it into something I never knew I always wanted.

A moment later they were kissing. It was masculine yet tender. It was rough yet deliberate. I felt my heart exploding out of my chest. My body heat increased exponentially. Moisture was all but gushing from me. I was beyond aroused. I couldn't tear my eyes from the sight before me.


Their muscular, taut bodies were pressed together, their hands feverishly yet cautiously exploring one another. My head started to fill with what felt like a lust-induced haze. Everything was too intense and overwhelming. I threw my head back and buried my face in my hands, letting out a tortured cry.

I felt a stirring at my legs and the next moment two bodies were pressed up against either side of me. One cold hand removed my right hand from my face as a warm hand removed the left.

"I know it's overwhelming, love. We're just trying to give you what you want. I know you want it, you know." Edward whispered reassuringly in my ear. "It's all for you." Rob whispered in the other.

They simultaneously planted kisses on either side of my neck. I squeaked. They both trailed soft kisses along my jaw and cheeks, eventually reaching my mouth, which they also kissed together. To my surprise they both slipped their tongues into my mouth at the same time. My tongue instinctively reached out to meet theirs. The mixture of hot and cold was exhilarating.


Edward pulled back slightly to let Rob enjoy me fully, all the while kissing my earlobe softly and occasionally whispering in my ear. Each one of them had a hand on one of my breasts and were gently squeezing and teasing me.

Rob then pulled away to let Edward kiss me passionately, stealing my breath away in the process. I grasped my hand around his neck and pulled him closer, deepening our kiss to an even more maddening intensity.

I swapped between the two of them as more time passed. Kissing and touching and grabbing and scratching and licking and sighing and moaning ensued. They were working me into a frenzy.

This is driving me insane, but it's clearly what I want... Edward knows it better than me.

Edward pulled me into a sitting position in front of him, while Rob settled behind me, pulling me against his chest. Rob pulled my legs open, revealing my still throbbing core which was glistening with my arousal.

Edward settled in front of me, facing me. He opened his legs and hooked them under mine and over Rob's. His icy cold, rock hard erection pressed up against my centre. I felt a fresh wave of moisture, which I instantly knew Edward could smell. His eyes flickered down to our bodies pressed up against each other, and when they returned to meet mine, they were pitch black with his own arousal. His cock twitched against me and I lifted my hips up, Edward's cock dragging down my soaking folds.


I paused, my hips in the air, Edward's cock poised at my entrance, Rob's hands clamped around my inner thighs, supporting me. My heart was thundering in my ears. Edward's gaze had me frozen in place, its intensity was overwhelming. Edward's cock twitched again and my instincts took over. I plunged myself down into him in one swift movement and was instantly filled. I gasped at the cold feeling of him inside me. It was completely surreal. I moaned loudly in unison with him.


Rob pushed his body flush with mine from behind, his soft yet firm chest a warm contrast to Edward's marble torso in front of me. Rob reached around and grabbed my breasts roughly, pawing at them feverishly. He was kissing and licking my neck and shoulder, nibbling at my ear, his erection pressing into the small of my back.

Wedged between the two most primally sexual men I could imagine, I felt on the verge of blacking out. I was moaning constantly, even when Edward thrust his tongue into my mouth with as much force as he dared. I started thrust my hips down onto him erratically. Edward's cock was maddening inside me. My body was struggling to adjust to the sheer size of him, coupled with granite feeling of it. It was almost impossible to find a rhythm because my hips would start to thrust forward of their own volition every time I tried to pull back.

Rob started to pull me back into a lying position on top of him and Edward adjusted his position over the two of us, placing his hands on either side of us. Rob took to exploring my now more exposed body with his smouldering hot fingertips. They felt like fire against the skin that had been pushed against Edward's chest.

Edward thrust into me once, leaning over my shoulder to capture Rob's lips in his. They kissed fiercely for a moment as I lay pinned between the two of them. My breathing was coming in short gasps and my heart sped up to an impossible pace. They both then returned their attention to me. Edward started thrusting into me rhythmically but deliberately. He grunted every time he slammed into me as I raised my own hips to meet his. His lips found mine and he kissed me with unbridled want. I groaned into his mouth, grabbing on to his hair in an attempt to pull him as deep into me as possible...


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Soooo????? What do you think? Well... there were not too much comments (although many of you visited our blog... dirty little things...)!

What to do ... what to do ... should we leave you hanging till next week?

We feel generous today!

You can read the end of the story here:
http://twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=5545"

Love you! *wink*

11 comments:

Elana said...

I hope you wicked girls enjoy the rest ;) Please review on Twilighted as well, I squeal like a 12-year old every time I get a new review!
This was my first fan fic, and there are a few others in the pipeline... Another Rob one-shot and then an alternate New Moon story, which is on its way ;)
Thanks again to the Team and everyone else for making me feel so welcome here. i am so happy among fellow gutter brains :D

lickhimright said...

We are very happy to have you dear Makehimmoan :)))

Review people! Review!!! LOL! Make her write some more!

Elana said...

Reviews will definitely fuel my writing fire ;)

undresshim said...

OMG!!
Makehimmoan I think u are good at this!!! keep writing!! ppl c´mon I know u want to say something but don't have the courage!! do it!! let your mind open and just dream...

Rob u can visit me in my dreams whenever u want...but u know that, right??

Anonymous said...

OMG you made me laugh not in a bad way though !!!
Makehimmoan u rule!!! loved loved the story I've had a really bad day today...just awfull but u have just made me smile for the first time today I kinda feel naughty each time i come and read this stories but urs really made me feel naughty ahahah I must say what a dream!!!! I wish I had these kinda dreams!! =)
xxxxxxxxx Fran

Ash said...

Yummy!! Good job girl! ;)

Ravishim Team said...

Thanks to Fran and Ash for commenting! We hope you'll come visit again!!

JoJo_KK said...

It was ok, bit tasteless for my liking and that's saying a lot lol

lickhimright said...

@Beth: Thank you for commenting girl! What do you mean "tasteless"? I was tasting Rob and Edward everywhere! *wink*

Wheaty's Girl Creations hearts twilight! said...

ome..i just had a thought..barely into the story..but hmmmmmm i can only say this here..but would it not be kickass to have edward 'go downtown'..the coldness of it..hmmm...lost in thought.......ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh lol
um as if you werent overwhelmed before..that should help calm you...lol
Its hot and its cold..hhahahahha lol OH my, lol I am picturing this..only it is me..instead of you....hahahahahahha lol *sighs* you are awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Unknown said...

Love it, second part even better than the first one ;-)
::goes away to change panties::
Ermm.. I was saying keep 'em cumming!







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